Wednesday, 20 November 2013

A little story...(super rough roughs)




Nino & Nina (script under the cut)

Page 1: Once upon a time there lived a poor family
                in a little house
                  on the edge of the city
             This is me, Nina, and this is a story about my adventure
Page 2: Dad took us into the city on a big bus
              I'd never been to the city before. I was so excited.
Page 3: Everything was huge
                   and strange
                       and scary-wonderful
             I wanted to stay forever.
Page 4: Dad bought us icecream, then he went off to do grown-up stuff
             Me and Nino sat on the steps and waited for him
Page 5: We waited.
              And waited.
Page 6: After a while, Nino said, "I don't think dad's coming back."
             Sometimes my brother is stupid, but this time it looked scarily like he might be right
Page 7: We handled it pretty well
             All things considered.
Page 8: "We can't stay here," I said.
              "But how do we get home?" asked Nino.
              Nina: The bus!
              Nino: No money.
              Nina: We could walk?
              Nino: Too far.
              Nino: We could call Mum and Dad?
              Nina: They don't care. They left us here.
Page 9: We were stranded.
                        In the dark, the city wasn't scary-wonderful. It was just scary.
        People passed us with shadowed faces
                 After a while, it started to snow.
Page 10: Nino held me very tight
                Under the shelter of the cathedral, we tried to sleep.
Page 11: Someone shouted. A witch!
                We ran and ran.
Page 12: We ran until we couldn't run any more.
                Then we walked.
Page 13: We walked even though we had nowhere to walk to
                Even though I was scared
                and the world was going wobbly at the edges
Page 14: We were deep in a dark forest now.
                Nino built us a little hut to sleep in
                but it didn't keep the dark things out
Page 15: There was a rumbling and a shouting, and then the ogre came
                and took Nino
Page 16: Me and Bunny ran and hid
Page 17: But it was too late
               Bunny: Nina, run!
Page 18: Bunny: Run!
               Bunny: run
               ...Nino, help me...
Page 19: Nina: Nino!
                When I woke up, Mum and Dad and Nino were there, with a strange man. I felt very ill.
Page 20: They told me it wasn't real
                          that we'd never left the city
                                      there were no ogres
                           no witches
                     no dark forest
                 just the city streets
                         fever brought on by the snow
                                     and a kind man who'd found us and taken us in
Page 21: But I knew what had happened, even if it was all muddled and shadowy
                Even if the ogre
                           turned out to be an angel

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